Monday, September 25, 2006

i'm fine

you see me
all ironed out
seemingly wrinkle free

i appear fine
neat and proper
yet you fail to see the signs:
the hollow eyes
the searching face
the hungry heart

you see past me
without even asking
you're too busy
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2 comments:

kanadians in korea said...

wow, did you write this mel? so beautiful, so haunting. so how i feel, all the time. thank you for voicing my heart.

10:02 PM
Ryan & Melanie said...

thanks em! yes, i wrote this...just a reminder that we are in a "hi, how are you, I am fine" culture, but perhaps not really in each other's faces.

10:49 AM

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